Sunday, May 6, 2012

Pensieve: Key West 2009

Of late I realized once again that I have a very interesting life, despite its setbacks, and that I have only done one Pensieve (which, of all things, was about Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince). Here's another, although it's not quite about the Boy Who Lived - well, not the one most Potterheads would think of, anyway.

In June of 2009, my immediate family and I ventured to the land - and waters - of Florida. This was not my first time, which was indeed mere weeks before the events of the first Pensieve. It was as great a place to relax as I remembered it from 2005: we stayed at a Hyatt Beach House, which was a quiet retreat with nice rooms and screened-in porches. This time I wrote what I called my first novel in a matter of days on my dad's laptop, as I would not receive my own for another few months. It was a perfectly atrocious story (and a little over 7,000 words filling forty-one pages - I still called it a novel because I didn't pay attention to its size and I was also too excited that I had finished something "sizable" for once) - atrocious because the characters were mere lifeless pawns (something with which I still struggle) and the whole story was a shameless ripoff of Paolini's Eragon, which is in turn a story stolen from Star Wars (which, my friend Ezra argues, is yet another ripoff of Lord of the Rings - I still need to find out why this is). Even so, I was proud of my blue-dragon story and still am, not because it was any good, but because I was on my way to being better. Which, I suppose, many of us are.

The Hyatt Beach House had a small enclosed beach - not one of those crowded stretches of sand with seven quadrillion tourists and obnoxiously-colored umbrellas and towels everywhere, but a small area with a tiny pier and a rocky wade-in waterline. There was still the giant cracked ball I remembered from when I was ten years old, covered in coastal sea-plants and invertebrates, and young barracudas, which would swim up to greet us. I am not afraid of barracudas, or most sharks for that matter, because if they have nothing to fear, then what have I? Caroline, my sister, said she was followed around by a six-foot barracuda; I wish I had seen it, but the juveniles were beautiful in their own way. They were light brown with stripes, as opposed to the more mature silver bodies. The water was perhaps ten or twenty feet deep by the pier's end, and I would take a gulp of air and plunge down to view more intimately the sea stars and urchins and sand dollars on the ocean's sandy floor. I think I need another vacation there; relaxation would do me a lot of good these days.

9 comments:

  1. I wouldn't go so far as to say Star Wars is a ripoff of Lord of the Rings (although Eragon is DEFINITELY a shameless ripoff of Star Wars), but it's definitely influenced by it. Just not to the degree that I'd call it a ripoff.

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  2. I've not seen (or read) either in some time. Refresh me please? :) Thanks.

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  3. Lord of the Rings is kind of the basis for all modern fantasy in some way shape or form. Just draw parallels from Eragon to Star Wars and from Eragon to Lord of the Rings and see what matches up. Gandalf/Brom/Obiwan is the obvious one. A lot of it is archetypes, but there's also Elrond/Oromis/Yoda, and Aragorn/Murtagh/Han a bit, although Murtagh isn't always the one in that role. Eowyn/Arya/Leia is another, although the movies match up more than the books because they're more commercial.

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  4. And the villain (Sauron/Vader/Galbatorix) was not so bad but then went corrupt? [I seem to remember either Fellowship or Towers - one of them, in book form - saying that Sauron was not always bad....]

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  5. Yep. They're all Lucifer figures.

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  6. ...Good point, why didn't I see it? That reminds me, if you haven't already, read "Murder Mysteries" by Neil Gaiman (a short story in the collection SMOKE AND MIRRORS). It objectively tells about the fall of a not-so-evil Lucifer. Very interesting.

    By the bye, thanks for the comments! I've been running low on them of late....

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  7. I haven't read any of Smoke and Mirrors- bought Good Omens today, though.

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  8. I bought that a little while back, still need to read it. And Anansi Boys, which I bought on the same trip. If ever you wanted, I could lend you S&M - I *think* I still have it.

    I have never read much by Terry Pratchett, except for part of The Colour of Magic. Seemed funny and good, but I got distracted. (Haha, this thread is all over the place!)

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  9. Anansi Boys is awesome. You'll enjoy it.
    And thanks, but I can always just get it from the library when I actually have time to read it.

    I've only read a short story by him, but I've heard he's fantastic.

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